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Soul Tribunal
02-26-2002, 10:06 PM
We are children
In a world of words,
and gestures
Our first thoughts
Bind our hearts,
to paper, to pen.

We exist,
just out of normal
Where our words...
Turn seconds to minutes
Minutes to hours.

It isn't a special handshake
nor fanfare that makes one
Acknowledge the other...
Tis a simple nod,
letting the other know
We hear their words in our minds
Feel that thunder in our veins
And drink in the beauty
Of a verse...to our souls

Dennis

TGos
02-27-2002, 02:08 AM
yeah baby, yeah

let it rain...

sleepygoat
02-27-2002, 06:43 AM
Nice! "our words/turn second to minutes/minutes to hours."

Icarus
02-27-2002, 08:24 AM
Amen.

Jeannie
02-27-2002, 03:30 PM
Oh wow is my first reaction. The second poem i read on joining this site and im lost for words-not a good reaction from a budding poet eh? I was really impressed with this piece-it touched my mind and made it tingle-oh dear poet?me? ok so lets stick wiv im a lover of poetry and this was really good.

Thanks for sharing it-made my night!

Jeannie xxx

Poeticpiers
02-27-2002, 04:57 PM
aAs a newcomer may I say that this site is what I have been looking for>
this is the first poem I have read in the cafe. I am mightily impressed.the sentiments expressed and the way in which they are expressed made this a treat for me to read thankyou poeticpiers

LSM
02-27-2002, 07:55 PM
beautiful

LSM

Soul Tribunal
02-27-2002, 09:39 PM
Thank you everyone....it is nice to see such kind replies to what I have made.

Dennis

Nightalone
02-27-2002, 10:20 PM
Beauty bleeds from every line here. The secret gnosis that comes with being a poet, as well as the fellowship we all share, are both very eloquently expressed. I very much enjoyed this piece.

Soul Tribunal
02-28-2002, 08:14 AM
It is my ballad to all poets.

Dennis

BamBiPurr
02-18-2003, 04:05 AM
....and quite an accurate ballad indeed.

=^..^=

topaztwin
07-05-2003, 10:42 AM
Our first thoughts Bind our hearts,
to paper, to pen.

See what I find when I venture into places I don't usually venture into? Excellent work!

Soul Tribunal
07-05-2003, 01:40 PM
Indeed Pat, indeed.
There is not always the shadow over everything...is there?

Dennis

Bryan
08-18-2003, 08:03 PM
nice job

sincere_poet
08-18-2003, 08:10 PM
Well said, Dennis. Very lovely.

painterchild22
06-24-2004, 03:35 PM
Oh my god....that was awsom... acctually i just joined and this was the first poem i read... damn... it is amazing... i have to admit it almost made me cry... that is exactally how i feel as a poet!!! I hope the other poetry can match this one... i know i am in the right place now. thankn you for putting it so well.

Ann Asher

VelvetCrow
11-11-2004, 08:33 PM
The tribunal has spoken...
very good....

DC Fire
11-01-2005, 11:06 PM
such is the quiet acknowledgement of writers, sharing the same passion separately.