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Kamikaze
02-13-2003, 12:39 PM
Just when I think I've found love,
It just runs away.
And when I think that I'm ready,
It will not stay.

Just when I feel so happy,
It tears me apart,
She give me the moonlight, not the sun.
It's killing me inside,
And damn it hurts,
And she can't even know what shes done!

I'm feeling every single curve of her body,
I'm holding perfection in my hands.
I'm kissing her lips, they're tasting so sweet,
It's enough to blow out my mind.
I guess when the heavens made her, it was for me,
For she is everything I need.
But it's a wicked wind, and a cruel streak...
She is the breeze.


Just when I'm lost in my mind.
She gave me light.
And in some very strange way,
She said what's right.

Just when I thought I knew her,
She has to go,
And I'm wondering if I'll see her again.
And when I'm falling in love,
It kills me inside,
And now in the storm I am left out in pain!

I'm feeling every single curve of her body,
I'm holding perfection in my hands.
I'm kissing her lips, they're tasting so sweet,
It's enough to blow out my mind.
I guess when the heavens made her, it was for me,
For she is everything I need.
But it's a wicked wind, and a cruel streak...
She is the breeze.

I'm holding an angel close to my heart,
Heaven has blessed me tonight.
She's got a devilish streak, toying with me,
That angel fades out from sight.
Heaven and hell must have collided within her,
I don't know if I've got what she needs.
Not will I ever find out the answers to my life...
For she is the breeze.

Just when I thought I knew her,
She has to go,
And I'm wondering if I'll see her again.
And when I'm falling in love,
It kills me inside,
Staring into the sky, I yell out in pain!

I'm holding a sculpture that cannot be real,
Whoever made her must be praised.
She's holding me close, and saying the right words,
I'm wishing now that she could stay.
Made from the finest porcelain, she's a piece of art,
And I know deep inside she's for me.
But when she leaves tomorrow, she'll take my heart,
And fade away into the breeze...

Angel
02-16-2003, 12:30 PM
Kami - this is really sad but so powerful!! I really enjoyed reading this.
Just when I feel so happy,
It tears me apart,
She give me the moonlight, not the sun.
It's killing me inside,
And damn it hurts,
And she can't even know what shes done!


This was my favorite part, the emotion is so raw.

*hugs*

Jess

Brittney L
02-18-2003, 06:42 PM
Kami,
I have never ever read anything from you quite like this. My favorite of yours!

Ohhh, what to quote what to quote! So much.
I'm holding a sculpture that cannot be real,
Whoever made her must be praised.

After she's gone I like how you used 'sculpture' to represent the model of her body that is there no more.

I'm feeling every single curve of her body,
I'm holding perfection in my hands.
I'm kissing her lips, they're tasting so sweet,
It's enough to blow out my mind.
I guess when the heavens made her, it was for me,
For she is everything I need.
But it's a wicked wind, and a cruel streak...
She is the breeze.

I absolutely had to quote all of this. Couldn't leave any of it out. This paragraph alone says so much about the whole song. It reveals its purpose without giving too much away. I think it could stand alone strongly.

I'm impressed with this one. Different than other things you have posted. Please post more like this one! :D
Really wonderful job.
Britt

Hippiechick
02-23-2003, 03:26 AM
Kam, I was going to quote all that Britt did. I loved the chorus. LOVED IT! It really "painted" such a beautiful picture of what love really does to a person. Great job here. I really enjoyed this ride.

Megan

Kamikaze
12-28-2003, 07:11 PM
Thanks, and bumping up again because I'm feeling this way all over again... she won't be coming back.

Lyly
01-04-2004, 07:13 PM
Just the image of her being the breeze...beautiful. Bravo. - Lyly

Insanity
01-12-2004, 07:12 PM
yeah beautiful..

crazylacey1818
01-25-2004, 03:30 AM
""I'm holding an angel close to my heart,
Heaven has blessed me tonight.
She's got a devilish streak, toying with me,
That angel fades out from sight.
Heaven and hell must have collided within her,
I don't know if I've got what she needs.
Not will I ever find out the answers to my life...
For she is the breeze.""

wow, I can picture this in my head, and it makes me want to re-read the whole thing over and over.

Nice.

CLine20
01-30-2004, 10:31 PM
I'm feeling every single curve of her body,
I'm holding perfection in my hands.
I'm kissing her lips, they're tasting so sweet,
It's enough to blow out my mind.


WOW!...just WOW! Its amazing. I especially loved that part. Its incredibly vivid imegry. Wonderful work.

:)