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02-16-2003, 01:47 AM
I held you in my arms.
I kept you in my heart.
I looked into your eyes.
Our lips touched—magic.
We spent so much time together.
I cherished every memory—did you?
Every moment we spent with each other,
Another symphony composed.
Every time we touched, held hands,
Another word written in the poem.
Every time you said, "I love you,"
It pierced my heart like a dagger.
It bled my soul, my mind.
It freed my expression.
You emphasized the good times of my life.
You epitomized what it meant to love and be loved.
You made me feel whole, complete.
You made me feel like I had everyrhing.
You also ripped my heart out of my chest,
Stomped on it, leaving a gory mess.
You thrashed it by severing me from your life.
You disappeared—you're as good as dead.
Should I still love you? Should I still care?
I do.

02-29-2004, 12:13 PM
So sad!

Why do we turn the power of our love against ourselves when chance and change remove its grantee? :(

02-29-2004, 11:58 PM
*tear* Oh gosh, I feel this. wow, do I feel this. great job. And if you want my opinion, It's ok if you still care...I do.


03-01-2004, 06:07 PM
a very powerful poem verilon! And I can relate!!!

Jess xx