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Poeticpiers
09-17-2003, 03:26 PM
Jetsam.

The sea recedes and leaves behind
along the highest water mark
treasures for beachcombers to find.

Sea shells, driftwood and sometimes
old plastic floats from fishing boats
and even coins from far gone times.

When there has been a storm at sea
and angry waves have lashed the shore,
you never know what there might be

left high and dry for you to find.
Each day I search my local beach
to exercise my legs and mind.

I look for curiosities
that I can keep for interest.
The one I have that I like best

A piece of scrimshaw carved I’m told
on whaling boats to pass the time
by hardy seafarers of old.

Whose boats sailed from the River Tyne
an industry that is no more.
By right of finding it is mine.

I’ve sea worn pebbles smooth as glass
a cutlass handle with no blade,
a wooden chest that’s bound in brass.

I’ve never found a treasure hoard
I don’t suppose I ever will
but it keeps me from getting bored

The sea recedes and leaves behind
all that it does not take away.
A mess of jetsam unrefined.

Deb Benson
09-17-2003, 03:49 PM
Ivor I love the feeling this gives me of days walking the shore and finding things left from the sea. Lovely. Deb

DaBomb
09-21-2003, 09:20 PM
I liked the terza rima layout; it made this feel very Robert Frost-like. And the way you wrote the sea supports that. I liked this poem a lot.

Bryan

Redstormy
09-23-2003, 02:22 AM
Oh this is awesome, this is for Beki right? Lovely write Ivor. :)

Red

Beki
07-05-2004, 11:49 AM
How did I miss this one? Ivor you bless me again and again with your seagifts...thank you so much my friend :)

Territorial Hawk
07-08-2004, 08:05 PM
:)

TRexroth
07-12-2004, 11:46 PM
yeah dabomb
this is kind of frost and melville
a cool portrayal of what the sea
can produce for us