cannibal lover

[Tavis263]

cannibal, I
cannibal, I
cannibal, I

on a super saturday
it's all I could hear,
click clack
never turning back
nothing here for you,
super mode, red shoe
kicked into, high gear
lost memories, the fear

backed up platypus
crazy for your troubles
jump the rail, you can't fail

little taste of, cannibal fighter
cannibal fighter
lost in a world full of manic people
static meters off the hook
never find what you need
in the, good book
it's time to shake you down
you're twisted mental decay
you're a *** but you're not gay
do it to yourself
do it to you
I bet it feels good
gutter track hopes
lost cause for the hapless sounds
taken to your back
put you down, like a fried egg
dropped like, the rotten one
nothing could be done

backed up platypus
crazy for your troubles
shovel plays the devil
and you cant handle it

bruised on the inside
nothing can save you now
playing in the dirt

backed up platypus
crazy for your troubles
click clack
super mode
red shoe

cannibal fighter
you can't fail
you can't fail
you're my only hope
top 10 in a number 5
you got to stay alive
you got to stay alive
stay alive
for the cannibal lover

[Lyly]

I love this song. It's flow, attitude and immages are excellent. Well done - Lyly

[dreammagic]

What fraidy said. Different enough to be interesting. I have no idea what lines like 'backed up platypus' are referring to, but that makes it all the more curious and original.

Good stuff.

Phil

[Tavis263]

Thanks all. Dreammagic always good to keep people guessing.

hmmm what happened to fraidy_cat? :/

Motavis
motavis@futureskully.com
http://www.motavis.com

[Brittney L]

This is different and original. There are a few areas I wasn't sure about in meaning, but hey, it's not all meant to be understood, is it?

What sort of music is this? Hard rock?

Britt

[manic]

never find what you need
in the, good book
it's time to shake you down
you're twisted mental decay


I think I like these lines the best but the whole thing is great. Very thought provoking, in that it's provoking me to wonder what all the images mean. But it's fast and it's furious and it's a bit bazaar which makes it all good. Good rhythm, good pace, Great work :)

-sarah

[Tavis263]

Actually Brittney, there is 1 other person that might understand
it and thats the one it was meant for. The Genre as they call it
is Industrial Electronic (examples- Bile/Skinny Puppy/KMFDM). Though I am
still composing the music for it and don't know when it would be done.

Thanks Sarah, you can learn a lot about the images just by
seeing what a true platypus does.

[4°]

this is great. the title provoked me and i was happy to see the lyrics you'd written backed it up well.
KMFDM? i could hear this to some KMFDM beats. that would rock.
good job.

[Tavis263]

working on the music as i type this :c)