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yellowhead
11-25-2003, 12:35 AM
Who will guard the guards?:

Sometimes I wonder
If I am destined to be alone
Just a hermit out at sea.

At times I ponder
What there is about myself,
That there is to value.

It is human nature
To deny yourself
People thrive on their own self-demise.

So how do we overcome this?
One may say, fight the rampage,
The other may reply, engross the dying of the light.

This article
Brings us only to believe
That human nature
Is one mess of a kind.

We could fight…
But it would do nothing
We could wait…
That would do nothing as well.

Or,
We can just sit back and except the inevitable,
Truth known,
We are dying,
Truth excepted,
Then let us die.

Dandylion
12-04-2003, 02:39 AM
Oh...this is haunting....I can relate to this so well...kinda eery. I loved this poem.

Bromanoph
12-04-2003, 03:09 AM
'Come, see how Death is a myth!
there are no deceased,
only deceived...
Death only awaits
those who believe.'

-- Saul Williams.

my brother said it.

much love,
Brom :rolleyes:?

the_grey_girl
12-04-2003, 11:38 PM
Excellent, yellowhead... I think this is my favorite piece you've done so far. Bravo!

Territorial Hawk
12-29-2003, 09:07 PM
Interesting, and it gave me goosebumps.

yellowhead
03-05-2005, 03:17 AM
well thank you all so much, i am sorry i did not reply sooner, my e-mail is down, but again thank you.

sea134
03-11-2005, 12:27 PM
LIke they said above this really knida scared me. But it was great.

VelvetCrow
04-05-2005, 06:19 PM
I got hooked from the first line, such an excellent write...