Human Waste

[Tavis263]

What I have in the end, you will take
Where I go, no one knows, how you got here
On the words I will feel, so unkind
what I take
what I take, you will leave
your just to damn proud, of the way i feel
are you just in it for the money
are you just, in it
I will always take
Where we went unknown to this world, I will go
Why do you take me, for such a fool
I take you
I take you forever
Your precious are the words, from which you came
I see you only in the dream
Pictures on the wall, no longer hang
How can you miss this, intangled web in which we weave
oh how you left, with out a word, on your breathe, from which to feel
I am here, where are you
Are you out there, Are you out there
and you can you see, what I mean, when I said, what I felt, when you came and how you left
oh, I how I wish these words, some how found, there way to the one in which they're meant for
as I stand here
as I live here
oh, how the emptiness
oh, how the joy
oh, how the mind breaks
oh, how the mind breaks
oh, how the mind breaks down
breaks down
breaks down
wasteland
wasteland
wasteland
wasteland
wasteland
wasteland

Human Waste
Human Waste
Human Waste
Human Waste
Human Waste
Human Waste

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DOWNLOAD MP3 >>> Motavis_HumanWaste(orgMix).mp3 (http://www.futureskully.com/Motavis_HumanWaste(orgMix).mp3)

[Lyly]

Travis, this is awesome...it's not in a standard song format and I think tht's why I like it so much. It's like a stream of thought turned song, love it. Captivating. - Lyly

[Tavis263]

Music for the song... older song never
really released... it was more a personal
thing... made the music,wrote the song,
sang the lyrics all in one night...
along with the other song Driven
Oh how She left, with out a word

HumanWaste.mp3 (http://www.futureskully.com/Motavis_HumanWaste(orgMix).mp3)
(note: right click on link and do a save target as)

[Dandylion]

This is really cool...I liked this alot. I like unusual forms, free flowing songs like this....now to get my speakers hooked up so I can hear it:)

[manic]

I quite like this, although I think some internal rhyme would help how it reads because right now I'm stumbling over it to try and figure out it's rhythm. Haven't had a chance to hear the audio clip but I'm sure this sounds great to music. You've got good powerful, strong lyrics here that I'm sure will go far.

Kudos.

-sarah

[Tavis263]

Yeah Manic, I have a strange melody going on in the song. As unique
as the song itself. Thanks Dandylion... yeah speakers help hehe.
I'm glad everyone likes the free flow of it. I was certainly
inspired. Till this day, it still fits other people I have run into
with the same kind of "spirit". I seem to always attract them kind
of people. :rolleyes:


Motavis
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http://www.motavis.com

[Hippiechick]

I totally agree with everyone's points here- how the free flowing nature of this song works- but as Manic pointed out- I was also having trouble finding its rhythm. I'd work on maybe making it free- but blocked into a certain tone... Just an opinion.

Great lyrics though. I felt the power behind them.. and maybe it'd help me to hear this.

Thanks for sharing!

PIP

[Tavis263]

Yeah this is one you have to listen to, to get the melody.
Again, I wrote it when I felt it, both the music and the words
at the same time. It was more of a personal thing
then something I ever planned to release...

HumanWaste.mp3 (http://www.futureskully.com/Motavis_HumanWaste(orgMix).mp3)

(note: right click on link and do a save target as)


Motavis
recordlabel@futureskully.com
http://www.motavis.com

[Tavis263]

must download to get the rythm :c)
:D

[doreen peri]

Just listened. Pretty wild! Sounds like it should be a piece in a rock opera, sung by a dark, struggling, angry character or something. Interesting piece! Thanks for coming back 2 years after your original post to share this again. I don't think I was around AC when you originally posted it.

[e-piph[lol]]

fantastic!

[Tavis263]

:c)

[beatnikbroad]

perty cool man. i like.

[Tavis263]

Thanks again everyone :c)