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Dandylion
11-29-2003, 02:22 PM
She dreams of sleeping,
long uninterupted hours
in a sweet baby like bliss.
Free from the struggle, the chaos
that engulfs her in her houserobe.
Slippers cover her feet,
cozy, fluffy, like dead rabbits
that whisper down the hall.
The counter top is cold, like her touch,
her breath as winter sets in.
The morning coffee, her thrill pill
to keep her sane day to day
swallowed in large gasping gulps.
Red, saggy, basket hound eyes
sweep across the room.
A mess.
The world makes little sense,
the daily paper confirms her suspicions.
The blackness of her insomnia
ripples through her,
a subtle poison setting in.
Coffee rings on the oak table,
once new and clean,
mark her days like a roman calender.
Tangled hair, knotted like an apple tree,
crowns her like the sleepless Queen she has become.
Smoke billows from her nostrils,
a fiery demon of nicotine
calms the weary blood.
Another day, the motion of the sun
has lost all meaning.
The cup becomes a heavy chalise
in her weakened hand,
spilling black nectar on her knees.
Mute, she curses no one
but herself.
These days must come to an end.
The hardened steel tastes cold and bitter
on her tongue.
Hands shaking from sleep deprivation
wind thier way around the handle.
Six magic bullets, a recipe for sleep,
spin in the chamber.
A Copper sentinel of peace
rockets through a hardened barrell.
At last, she sleeps.

iblieve
11-30-2003, 03:36 PM
I thought I'd find you here in the darker shadows of this site, lol. iblieve this one defines the meaning of dark poetry. The imagery is so thought out and paints a tragic scene. Loved it my dear. iblieve

iblieve
11-14-2004, 12:32 PM
Very dark dear, wonder how this one got lost in the shuffle because it captures life lived in the depressed state of mind beautifully. Your "C"

Dandylion
11-14-2004, 09:07 PM
damn baby...I totally forgot about this poem!!! Im glad you pulled it back up...I think I feel better these days...lol I love you~Dandy

VelvetCrow
11-15-2004, 07:32 PM
excellent poem Dandy, I like it very much so descriptive.

AlienPoet
11-15-2004, 09:18 PM
Walk away from the dark and into the light of day and breathe deeply . Hugs to you and cheers to your talent with the pen.