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Okami
12-03-2003, 04:44 PM
Her kisses are bloodroot
Eyes as dark as a gentlemans suit

Those fingers pure aresenic
Necklace of cherry loral picked

She basks in her poisonous lair
Thornapple adorning her hair

With hemlock for her bed
At her invitation you'll be dead

Black nightshade to your breast
If only for just the slightest caress

Although you'll become delerious
A death by her is much too serious

To take as just a simple poison.

Dandylion
12-04-2003, 02:31 AM
I liked how you incoperated all those poisons into this piece, nicely done! I really liked this...alot:)

iblieve
12-04-2003, 06:00 PM
Wow, so you know my last giirlfriend, the one before Dandy. You captured her well, lol. Excellent write!

Okami
12-05-2003, 05:26 PM
Dandylion, thank you, I love poisons...they give me chills. Glad you enjoyed this.

ibelieve, I donno, might have met your last girlfriend in a dream once.;) My thanks to you.

strawberygashes
12-06-2003, 01:55 AM
Wow, and thats all I can say.

~morgan

iblieve
11-14-2004, 12:36 PM
Re-read this and I am taking it to darc for December my friend, if that is alright by the where you been??? "C"

VelvetCrow
11-15-2004, 06:57 PM
good poem the first that I read from you Okami, I like it.