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Kamikaze
12-06-2003, 11:02 PM
Winter, the season to be happy and jolly,
The meaning confined to a deeper memory.
It lost it's meaning when you walked away,
Tell me please, why you wouldn't stay?

The red-ribbed robin still sings it's song,
Is it telling me that maybe I was wrong?
The christmas fairies sing in their choir,
While my pride is laid, burning in the log fire...


Is there something there that I have missed?
What will replace the feeling of your kiss?
Tell me if everything I dreamed of is
Just all a dream.

Why does the winter snow feel colder to me?
When this is the season to be so happy.
All I wanted was your loving arms,
But at the seams...

I'm dying inside.


The lonely night can come and claim my soul,
For theres no need for it now, or so I'm told.
Santa can't give me what I want this year,
And thats bring me close to the point of tears.


Why does winter seem to hate me so?
When I'm happy, it always seems to let it go.
What if next year is just all the same,
What a cruel game.

So, to hell with all happiness and hope,
Deep inside I know I have the will to cope.
I'm not sure how I'll make it through,
Because deeper down...

I'm dying inside.


Please can you tell me when this season ends,
Because that the oonly time my wounds will mend!

Her present is still sitting there under the tree,
Should I destroy it or just let it be?
Her favourite wine, wrapped and waiting to be had,
But it's still quite sad.

Is there a star there that I failed to reach,
And if there is, can someone help me please?
I'm just waiting for the spring to come,
And welcome me.

With open arms.

Because my heart...

Is dying inside...


And in no-one else I can confide.

manic
12-08-2003, 03:33 PM
No I wouldn't change that, but I would change "Just all a dream" to "All just a dream" because it's more pleasing to say.

I think all in all you've captured the loneliness and pain you wanted to get in these lyrics, so it makes for a good moving piece.

-sarah

Lyly
12-09-2003, 07:24 PM
I like that this is a serious topic, yet you managed to weave in some lightness to it. Like when you mention Santa, waiting for spring, and saying to hell with hope because you know you can deal....makes me think of something SimplePlan might sing. Good read- Lyly