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Lyly
12-07-2003, 09:57 PM
Floating somewhere in my mind
your words are drowning me
holding me under time
I can hear them in my mind

I think I'm screaming
I can hear it in my mind
I think I'm screaming
I must be dreaming
'Cause you only hear my song

If I still see you I am blind
You're not really here anymore
Yet in the corner of my eye
I see your phantom-spector flying by

I think I'm screaming
I can hear it in my mind
I think I'm screaming
I must be dreaming
'Cause you only hear my song

I expect you know how you torment me
by the way I act sometimes
Always turning, always searching
Look hard enough and you will find

I think I'm screaming
I can hear it in my mind
I think I'm screaming
I must be dreaming
'Cause you only hear my song

Dandylion
12-14-2003, 04:34 PM
this is wonderful and I love the flow....beautiful...can hear it in a song. I loved it~Dandy

Lyly
12-14-2003, 08:58 PM
Thanks for reading Dandy, and thank you for taking the time to comment. i'm glad you liked this. i don't think it's one of my best pieces...parts of it had been sitting around for months and I just couldn't put it together untill now. -Lyly

Hippiechick
12-23-2003, 03:29 PM
Ly,

This was great- The words seemed jumbled at first, but It really turned out good. I would imagine anger, and a fast tone/pace to go with these words. It's almost if you sang it slow, the words would lose their meaning.

Thanks for sharing this!

PIP

Lyly
12-25-2003, 10:51 PM
Yeah, HippieChick, you imagined it right. thanks for reading!! - Lyly

Okami
12-26-2003, 02:49 AM
The song lyrics are all too real. Dreaming in a nightmare, and scared half to death, you only pray that sound is coming out. You hear it, but are you really screaming?