Will I see you at the (forever) after-party?

[TorturedJester]

Will I see you at the (forever) after-party?

Why does death always smell like carnival atmosphere
stagnant air dissolving into frigid winds of change
and I can sense the scent of cotton candy and corndogs mixed with treason
Loneliness feels to me like nights of fighting with my father
when I died for him at birth
just to justify my worth
The tears that I cry now taste like malnutrition
when I was nourished in the womb..9 months
to shape my doom
but now I'm waiting for the 9
to rewind what’s in my mind
I wonder If I'll see you at the forever after party
we can share an empty room
and burst balloons once
filled with gloom
We'll light candles to our deception
and then blow them out to solve
the great mystery of this life
before this tired soul dissolves
with the clowns and all the jesters
that have shed their masks and sins
by peeling back their laughter
to expose true fear within
Ain’t it funny how goodbyes always smell like the county fair..but perhaps we'll share a room one day
or another breath of air

[iblieve]

Sometimes living memories over and over is like a perpetual never ending death. They will only perish when your rotting corpse is buried to become a feast for the hungry worms.

BUT,

We have the magical potion,
We use curser motion
to rid ourselves of wasted devotion,
and unreturned emotion.
We are kindred spirits and our muses twins, my friend.
Another Black Market Dreamer Anthem, iblieve
P.S. send me the by-laws???

[Dandylion]

Damn...what a feeling from this one! I loved the carnival images, yah...they do dont they? Never thought about it until you said something...great write bro~Dandy

[TorturedJester]

whatsup whatsup whatsup?!lol Hey does that mean i have your r.s.v.p. for this little after party shin-dig?lol
Thanks for the response my brother, you are the only one these days besides D, enjoying this here shi* I'm putting out. And i know all of my stuff doesn't stink..lol
Well this piece just came from a haunting moment i had recently aned just laid it down on paper. I have this agreement with life my man, it gives me what its got and i take it and put it in the bank with all my other writings. I know you can understand this. My novels are based on alot of past experiences as I'm sure yours are too, and many of them are pretty interesting too..lol Near death experiences and life throwing unbelivable screwballs. Anyways, its always great to hear from a kindred soul. I'll have those by-laws for you shortly. I'm still dealing with the webdesigner. I'll write you later toinight to catch you up but give me any ideas you may have come-up and I look forward to hearing from you bro. Peace and love. Zack

[iblieve]

The readers will come, your dark talent shines. Yea, I might not be there at the after party, cause I know once my happy a** hits the universal death plane I will be checking out the sites on the other side, lol. So catch me if ya can. iblieve

[Bromanoph]

brother z,
this one loves your words.

much love,
Brom :rolleyes:?

[zienzieu]

from zz to shining z... :) Love it!! I, for one, will be the first in line...

[TorturedJester]

Thats so sweet ZZ, you put a smile on my face:) Thank you and I'm so glad you liked it. Z;)

[TorturedJester]

Brother Bromanoph,
The torturedone thanks you:) Really, that means alot to me. Peace. Zack

[mike poet]

I like the rhyme scheme in certain parts of this I like to try to do that sometimes rhyme within rhymes. You did well with this, I need to read more of your stuff.:D

[TorturedJester]

thanks Mike, I'm gonna check your work out here shortly. I appreciatte your interest and hope you are not dissapointed with what you find.

thanks deanseven. I apprecaitte your time and effort. Glad you saw something beneficial in this piece. tj