Ease my rough-worn spirit (in the theme of DaBomb's Oceanic)

[judih]

take the rough
welcome the confused
ease my soul smooth

sing in waves and crests of surf
paint the sun gently
in soothing scintillation

come oceans of destiny
lap my toes with invitations
urge me to merge with you

....judih

*peace*

[DaBomb]

Of course, when I saw this I had to be the first to reply :D. Seriously, this is an intriguing write - an extension of friendship to the ocean. The words you chose all flow together smoothly on the tongue... it has the gentleness of whispering. I love this work Judih.

Bryan

[judih]

thank you, Bryan for whispering this poem
it was written with a voice of no voice

judih
*peace*

[Michael]

j., I usually like to quote a part of a work that particularly impresses me. However, I had to quote Bryan in his response to you because he sums it up so accurately.
Originally posted by DaBomb
an extension of friendship to the ocean. The words you chose all flow together smoothly on the tongue
I wholeheartedly agree.

[Poeticpiers]

Judih sister mine you have the words and the skill to say exactly
what you mean

[judih]

michael, thanks for reading
( a while ago- i guess i've not been concentrating!)

ivor,

thank you for listening

judih
*peace*

[Meta]

Originally posted by judih

come oceans of destiny
lap my toes with invitations
urge me to merge with you


oh, yes...
:heart:
Meta

[judih]

yes
i know

(i wish)

happy new year, meta babe.
good year to us all

judih
*peace*

[nannabug]

Beautiful, judih. *applauds*
such a pleasurable read

[TRexroth]

this poem emotes harmony
and i have to read da bombs poems next

we need more good people
trex

[judih]

thank you, nanna

thanks to you, trex

off to read your comment to daBomb - we do need more good people
and we need to praise the ones who make us feel good

judih
*peace*

[monkey boy]

oceans, toes or soul, the ocean smooths all...
mb

[judih]

the pebble bears witness

judih