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Soul Tribunal
12-14-2003, 01:01 AM
Times do change
And one cannot stop
The hearts desire
Nor its pain

What changes inside you?
To wall your heart
in hellish ice
so very cold, to my touch

One can only
Tempt the fire
Before his being
Is thus consumed

And not much longer
Dare I stand
In that maelstrom
Of your soul

So hold me close
Or wound me quick
My last desires
Bled so true

Please catch me quick
For I am falling...
In...and out
Of love with you...

Dennis

Dandylion
12-14-2003, 04:28 PM
This is absolutley beautiful. I love that last stanza...so wonderful and moving..Im a fan:)~Dandy

Beki
12-11-2010, 07:24 PM
"So hold me close
Or wound me quick
My last desires
Bled so true

Please catch me quick
For I am falling...
In...and out
Of love with you..."

WOW...HOW DID i MISS THIS ONE?

Soul Tribunal
01-19-2011, 02:38 PM
Wow, I have not seen this one in 8 years now....
How times have changed...

Dennis

drowning_glory
01-22-2011, 02:31 AM
so very cold, to my touch.

eternal words.

canoli74
01-22-2011, 01:32 PM
love this line:

So hold me close
Or wound me quick

Beki
02-08-2011, 09:41 PM
STILL RINGS TRUE WARRIOR MINE :-)

Soul Tribunal
02-23-2011, 01:41 PM
Indeed it does.

ST