Umbrella Scene

[Brittney L]

At times you over analyze the fall
study weather patterns to excuse it all
when the water gets too deep,
it’s one jump and a leap
to avoid drowning between

it’s a cold and misty day
take your sunshine and crawl away,
you’re going to get caught in the rain

Another umbrella scene
take it for what it means
one more time you’re stuck alone
cradling yourself inside your home
let the world rotate around your pillow
and cry, cry, cry

Need an excuse to die inside
pray He’ll send a holy light
rescue the girl trapped in- soul
give her a reason to hold
the sun rays when tomorrow dawns

You refuse to excuse the reasons
all hope was there last season
when the words “Always, Forever”
meant so much stuck together
like scotch-tape on a Christmas present

it’s a cold and misty day
take your sunshine and crawl away,
you’re going to get caught in the rain

Another umbrella scene
take it for what it means
one more time you’re stuck alone
cradling yourself inside your home
let the world rotate around your pillow
and cry, cry, cry

it’s a cold and misty day
I’ll take my sunshine and crawl away,
'cos once again, I’m caught in the rain
and I can't help but cry, cry, cry

[Hippiechick]

Well Hello Miss. Britt!

I LOVED this song!!!! The whole concept - the umbrella.. We have tons of songs about the rain.. and you took that to another level. Great job indeed!

There is this museum here in PA that has nothing but Umbrella's Hence the name.... Umbrella Museum. This title reminded me of that.

Great song!


Megan

[Lyly]

Indeed, this is a whole new level. This is the second time I have read this, the first I couldn't reply because I was too tired to really think about the lyrics, lol. But finally coming back to it I really enjoy it. It reminds me of something you might hear from Natalie Imbruglia. Tres Bien. - Lyly

[Brittney L]

Always a pleasure to see you and have you reply Megan! Umbrella Museum? How odd, yet cute! haha

Lyly, I do like Natalie Imbruglia so I take your comment as a compliment though I am not entirely familiar with her songs, just a few.

Thank you both so much!
Britt :)

[HeartOnAPage123]

Wow! What an awesome song! That's wonderful. When I saw the thread title I was thinking...hmm...ok...that's um...interesting, I decided to look at i anyways and I'm glad I did! I was blown away! I love the umbrella part, the rain, and wow you just tied so many elements into it. Anyhow, enough of my rambling.;)The point is you did a really good job.


write on


heart

[Brittney L]

Heart,
Thank you! What comments. I was surprised at your remarks, really.

Rain's a little too overused and I admit I'm guilty of overdoing it but I thought I'd tie the umbrella here to give it a spark of unique feeling.

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :)

Britt