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iblieve
12-18-2003, 01:10 PM
I don’t want to think about you
anymore.
Our love was a tragedy I’ll
close the door.
Turn and walk away from love so
hard to do.
Seemed to be the only way I
could please you.

I will never let it go I’ll
hold on tight.
To those special memories when
love was right.
So few and so far between but
special still.
Passions burning brightly and I
loved the thrill.

There’s not any thing I could do, but
let it go.
Grab a hold of a new dream and
chase rainbows.
There is no light in the past of
broken dreams.
I see a new light beckoning
I’m redeemed.


Inside my heart embers still burn
just for you.
Passion’s flames dying, slowly fade,
makes me blue
I don’t want to think about you
anymore
Our love was a tragedy I’ll
close the door.

iblieve

TearyEied
12-18-2003, 02:48 PM
ibelieve-
as i read you poetry, sometimes i wonder if you and i are sharing a muse. you always seem to express what i cant get out. you are an amazing writer!
Danie

sTILLbREATHING?
12-18-2003, 03:10 PM
"There’s not any thing I could do, but
let it go.
Grab a hold of a new dream and
chase rainbows.
There is no light in the past of
broken dreams.
I see a new light beckoning
I’m redeemed."
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i loved that part, overall a great expression of emotions...
i loved it!

sb :cool:

Dandylion
12-18-2003, 07:13 PM
another fine example of a broken heart. You know they never mend, right? We just move on...or try to. Beautiful and tragic~Dandy

iblieve
12-19-2003, 01:15 PM
Hi Danie, Thanks a lot, A comment like yours is the highest praise I can get. To have someone else say they know or can feel the emotions I expess in my poetry makes it all worth while. I am one of those poets that writes to share my thoughts, feeling and emotions and to have them read and understood , you made my day. Thank you again. iblieve

sTILLbREATHING?, I am also fond of the lines you highlighted in your comment and thank you so much for reading me and for getting the emotional input this one has instilled into it. Letting go and closing the door is sometimes the most painful part of a relationship, when all hope is abandoned. Thanks again my friend. iblieve

And to you My ddearest Dandy, I know you can relate and I know you understand for we have both been broken by relationships. Always my redeemer dear. simply your "C"

sTILLbREATHING?
12-22-2003, 12:21 PM
it is very hard, i know exactly what you mean..
but here is to the future! whatever that may bring!
i do wish you all the best
sb :yaknow:

iblieve
12-26-2003, 01:30 PM
It is alright now, after i got the damn door shut and bolted. I wish you the best too sb. iblieve