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dancer_diva
12-18-2003, 11:03 PM
When i'm with him, I feel free
I feel the love he has for me
When I slip into my lovers embrace
And look up at his wonderful face
The look in his eyes, the feel of his touch
Baby I love you so damn much
He kissed me once, He kisses me now
And to him I make this vow

My lips will never utter a lie
My eyes will never tear and cry
I'll never leave, I'll never stray
With you is where my love will stay
My love for you will last forever
When you are not here and when we're together
This feeling I have cannot be wrong
Cause the love we have is everlasting and strong

From the moon and stars to the rising sun
From morning to evening we're never done
I accomplish so much with him by my side
Without him I'd probably run and hide
Sitting here thinking of you
Makes me realize what love can do
He kissed me once, he kisses me now
And to him I make this vow

My lips will never utter a lie
My eyes will never tear and cry
I'll never leave, I'll never stray
With you is where my love will stay
My love for you will last forever
When you are not here and when we're together
This feeling I have cannot be wrong
Cause the love we have is everlasting and strong

The way his lips feel on mine
Oh that feeling is so divine
The love we have will never die
Even when we say our last good-bye
We were put on this earth to be united
There is no reason to try and fight it
He kissed me once, he kisses me now
And to him I make this vow

My lips will never utter a lie
My eyes will never tear and cry
I'll never leave, I'll never stray
With you is where my love will stay
My love for you will last forever
When you are not here and when we're together
This feeling I have cannot be wrong
Cause the love we have is everlasting and strong

Lyly
12-25-2003, 11:08 PM
dancer_diva, I enjoyed the repetition of the lines, "He kissed me once, he kisses me now /And to him I make this vow" catchy. It works. Although the message you have is not new, I am not bothered by this...you made the words work and not sound as though you are just repeating what hundreds of other writers have been saying for hundreds of years. Bravo. - Lyly