Again

[Lady Arduriel]

walking through this phantom wall
invincible insanity till
what's mist meets flesh and blood
embrace the saving flood and I
sleep to a new song
climbing up this endless hill
the angels that control my world
erase who I had been ebfore
the stars are singing sweetly
as I learn to live again

twisted creativity and
mock superiority
buried with the former me
still my inferiority
may come to victory
so there's nothing left
nothing else
but learning how to live again

standing on a nameless shore
by an ocean once dyed red
somewhere here I lost myself
but now the darkened past is dead
and I will mourn no more
breathing has no guarantees
no promise of a second time
so I pause, record over memoriess
but will the former life that scarred me
take away what's newly mine

and yesterday is nothing more
than dried blood on the floor
the body dead without a core
a shell of what has gone before

that's buried with the former me
still my inferiority
may come to victory
so there's nothing left
nothing else
but learning how to live again...

[Lyly]

Lady A- I finally found a spare moment to spend here from all the chaos I'm living in right now...I was looking for a song to relate to my situation to give me some form of peace, or at least placidness of mind...I saw your song title and I just had a feeling this would be it...and it is. Thank you for posting. And from a strictly feedback/workshop perspective, I will have to say that lines that stood out for me were: "the stars are singing sweetly/as I learn to live again","by an ocean once dyed red/somewhere here I lost myself", "breathing has no guarantees/no promise of a second time/so I pause, record over memoriess/but will the former life that scarred me/take away what's newly mine",and "and yesterday is nothing more
than dried blood on the floor"...to name a few :) And of course the closing...bien. - Lyly

[Lady Arduriel]

thank you lyly, and good luck with your chaos. If you need to talk, just send me a PM. *hugs*

[Insanity]

another good write, do you have any music to put to these songs? you have a talent here.

[Lady Arduriel]

I have music in my head, but nowhere else. I should remedy that. I'm glad you think I'm good at this.