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Lyly
12-23-2003, 11:59 AM
How dare you say that I don't live-
that I don't live my life the way I should
I may live in ways that you don't understand
but don't you ever say my life is fading in my hands

You're the one who held me up
You're the one who let me slide
You're the one who turned and ran
Yeah, you're the one, you're the one, you're the one

I'm so afraid of saying anything to you
because I never know when you'll turn away
And I'm so ashamed of feeling like I do
SO i wait, so I break, for another day

And you should know, you should know
all you do to me
But I won't say, no I won't say
because you don't want to know

You're too afraid to keep your promises to me
for reasons I can only imagine
You were once ashamed, of what you did to me
So you fly, so you hide, from all you have been

And you should know, you should know
all you do to me
But I won't say, no I won't say
because you don't want to know

You're the one who held me up
You're the one who let me slide
You're the one who turned and ran
Yeah, you're the one, you're the one, you're the one

How dare you say that I don't live-
that I don't live my life the way I should
I may live in ways you don't understand
but don't you ever say my life-
Don't you ever say my life
is fading in my hands

Hippiechick
12-23-2003, 03:22 PM
Lily, this was excellent writing. The message is clear and to the point. Lyrics are great.. would love to put this to music and rock out. ( Or light a candle and make it slow and jazzy).

Great job here.

Hippiechick:angel:

Lyly
12-25-2003, 10:56 PM
Thank you Hippiechick. Positive comments are greatly appreciated. I'm glad you liked it. I too would like to put music to this...unfortunatley my musical skills are, er...in training. In time...in time. Thanks again - Lyly

crazylacey1818
01-25-2004, 03:38 AM
You're the one who held me up
You're the one who let me slide
You're the one who turned and ran
Yeah, you're the one, you're the one, you're the one


:-)

I like this part.

Lyly
01-25-2004, 07:48 PM
Thanks, glad you liked it! :)