Die Tomorrow

[TearyEied]

If I were to die tomorrow,
how would you feel?
Would you feel guilty cuz you left me?
Well I hope you do, cuz you messed me up bad
and i’m not the same person anymore
I don’t care about anything
and your picture hurts my heart like hell.
I hope you feel guilty cuz it’d be your fault,
and you know that, don’t you?
Yeah, you know I got messed up when you left me
and you didn’t care.
If I could have just five minutes of your hugs,
and maybe a kiss,
I could die happy.
But I wont be getting that, now will I?
So when I die, just know I died in misery,
and you were the only thing I thought about.
And please know that I died in pain,
and the blood that I shed is for you.
Bottle it and put it on your mantle,
so you’ll always remember,
and maybe it’ll hurt you back .
Maybe seeing me in a casket,
silent and painless,
will hurt you,
and maybe then you’ll miss me,
but just know this is your fault.
Feel Guilty.
Just don’t be sorry,
I love you.

[DaBomb]

There is a lot of conflict in this piece; the desire to see him pained over his work, and yet the desire for connection. Human nature is funny that way. This feels very true to life in its feeling. Nice work Teary.

Bryan

[TearyEied]

thank you so much, bomb, i'm glad you enjoyed it.

[iblieve]

Another excellent dark piece, but it was too real for me to enjoy it. It took me to a dark, lonely place i have been and never want to re-visit. Your talent is amazing, your darkness will lead you to the light. iblieve

[Vetta54537]

Excellent piece! Very real and true. Love it!;)

[TearyEied]

vetta, thanks so much

ibelieve, im sorry if my peice made you sad or brought back memories, but thats for your reply

[TorturedJester]

this is powerful and pulled me to where I've been before. I could scream till my lungs exploded out of my chest and the question would be why!!!why would someone murder someones character,identity and outlook and label it love? I dunno. never will understand some people. I loved this piece. thanks for wrting it. zack

[TearyEied]

zach-
i love when people relate me work to their own lives, although its awful to know that it's happened to them. did that make sense?? lol thanks for your reply.
Danie

[ascension]

I really like the title of this piece. I agree with bryan, there is quite abit of conflict going on inside of you and the struggle is apparent and passionate in its intensity yet unresolved as an inner conflict. It's like throw a plate hear something break. Sometimes that feels really good.

hugs to you

[TearyEied]

thank you very much, i would love very much to throw a plate!
thanks, and hugs back to you.
Teary

[Presence]

*Hugs* Such a fiery piece showing anger, but at the same time... it's hard to hate someone when you're still in love with me. I'm a bit speechless... but what I can say is, I love your poetry. It's strange how I can relate to very small details within the work. Yours, Presence

[TearyEied]

I think it's awsome that we can relate to each other's writings like that, though I do wish neither of us would have to have gone through any of it. thank so much

Teary