His Face Is Stone

[DaBomb]

For hours
she cries,
pleading,
begging for
answers..

Why?


Stone-faced and
cold,
his grave offers no reply.

[iblieve]

I see you have a flair for the dark too. Welcome to the darkside my friend. iblieve

[TorturedJester]

yeah da bomb, this was dark and groovy. Just don't get stuck down here with us tortured spirits..lol..I loved this short but sweet dark side to your muse. nice job. zack

[ascension]

dabomb this truly hits a chord.

[DaBomb]

Thank you for the welcome iblieve. There's more where this came from.

Zack, I try my best to come to terms with these kind of emotions so as to be able to move on. Thanks for the reply.

I'm sorry that it rings true ascension. My condolences, and thank you for responding to my poem.

Bryan

[Soul Tribunal]

We can sit there and howl at the sky....for but one answer....but there is never a reply. Well written my friend....you captured the moment pure.

Dennis

[Territorial Hawk]

very dark.

[DaBomb]

Wow, it's been a while. Thank you Dennis, from sooo far back in the year. I have actually seen something similar to this, a man sitting mournfully at his wife's gravesite almost continually. I marvel at that kind of love, unbroken by death.

Thank you for digging freedom, and I'm glad I planted something decent. :)

I found the perfect forum for it THawk. This forum is like Darkness Central. Thank you for replying.

Bryan

[Aislin_MMH]

wow......

just...

wow....


Short, but nicely so...very direct, kind of just...smacks you in the forehead and runs (I mean that in a good way ;))

~Angie

[Wulf]

Sometimes, there is no answer...

a fine write

[Dandylion]

Im glad they pulled this one back up....excellent my friend~Dandy

[Salynn]

Hi DaBomb,
I can surely relate to this one,
been at my two stillborn son's gravesides many a times.......no answers..
but I kow one day I will get one.
Thanks for sharing
peace, hugs,and love
saLynn

[DaBomb]

Thank you Angie. While brevity isn't my forte, this piece kind of indicated to me when it had made its point.

Yes Wulf, it can be incredibly hard to hear an answer over the deafening of a tragedy. But still hope remains. Thank you for your reply.

I'm glad you got to read and reply Dandy. Thank you my friend.

I'm truly sorry to hear that this resonates so strongly Lynn, especially with such an innocent life lost. I admire (and echo) your faith that you will someday have the answers that elude you at the present. Thank you for sharing your reply. My hopes for your peace.

Bryan

[iblieve]

The other side of the coin is revealed here, you write dark with a unique touch, ah, your light is shining my friend iblieve

[DaBomb]

Thanks Dean. I'm glad that this one worked as well as it did.

I appreciate that C. There is usually a glimmer of hope, even in the darkest night. Thanks.

Bryan