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joni-marie
01-01-2004, 10:52 PM
into my life you burst
a bright orange sun
whose streamers of complexity
eclipsed a hybrid heart

I melded into you
as sweet butter onto bread
hips joined
we simmered in the pot
liked two bleached bones
spiced with honey thyme

then in rancid heat
dull-edged serrated words
sliced through tissue skin
to bleed orgasmic offenses
on a splintered head

now in mute complicity
we avoid gazes
of admiration pruned
to await the final confessions
of crimson callalilies
now lying dead

Dandylion
01-02-2004, 02:19 AM
this is wonderful! I loved the imnages...very intense with your word choices! Just saying wow over and over...and I LOVED the title:)~Dandy

joni-marie
01-02-2004, 04:08 PM
thanks much, dandy....

glad you liked my poem!

joni-marie

in_coherant
01-07-2004, 03:59 PM
"bleed orgasmic offenses"...wonderful.

joni-marie
01-08-2004, 10:03 AM
thanks for reading and commenting, jackie....

joni-marie