View Full Version : Rest Here

01-03-2004, 05:02 PM

Rest here, my love,
you seem so dead.
Lie down, right here,
upon this bed.

Rest here, my love,
Those weary eyes-
Worry no more,
Feel free to cry.

Rest here, my love,
Before you go,
Be silent now,
I love you so.

You've awoken now,
To me crying.
Please understand,
My soul is dying.

You're leaving now,
Going back to "Her",
This time we've had
Is such a blur.

Now I want you to leave,
Just get up and go.
Now that you've rested,
Your eyes are aglow.

Goodbye, Dear love,
We shall meet again-
For if we don't,
These dreams will end.


01-04-2004, 01:35 PM
poems like this are only borne from some
deep well of pain. worth it just to touch love
however momentarily. worth it just to
write something just like this....

perfect...but aglow is more accurate i think.


01-05-2004, 01:53 PM
this was really sad, so heartfelt and true. Oh...this brought back the agony all too well. ~Dandy

01-05-2004, 06:29 PM
I really enjoyed this.

01-05-2004, 06:30 PM
elisah- thank you! finally! i had drawn such a blank on that! thank you! i will fix that right away.
yes, what you said was exact. but sometimes just that moment isnt enough...:(

thank so much. i'm sorry if i brought back memories.

01-09-2004, 02:47 PM
Good write D. but u should know that it hurts just as much when ur forced to decied. I liked the other post u have in here too.

01-09-2004, 08:22 PM
thanks so much, james and beth.

01-10-2004, 02:06 AM
Ah teary, you do capture the feeling of loss so well. Another favorite of mine. iblieve

01-12-2004, 07:32 PM
thanks, iblieve.