PDA

View Full Version : egocide


Lady Arduriel
01-04-2004, 04:33 PM
look inside and do you see
what a bitch that life can be
where's your alto ego baby
it's dancing while you bleed
catch the rain on your tongue
but you can't keep what's already gone

and cry, cry while you die
tears can't save you now
mourn what you've become
before your voice is gone

can you see me laughing
at the end of all your acting
well I told you so
it's not my fault you know
you killed your own dreams
self destructed as it seems

so cry, cry while you die
tears can't save you now
mourn what you've become
before your voice is gone

and I tried to save you
tried to sacrifice myself for you
but you rejected me and I
stood back and let you cry
cry yourself to death

cry, cry yourself to death

maybe I'll mourn you and
maybe I will hold your hand
but I can't save you now
you're too far and I don't know how
so I'll laugh and I will weep
until at last you finally sleep

and cry, cry while you die
tears can't save you now
mourn what you've become
before your voice is gone...

Dandylion
01-05-2004, 02:28 PM
wow...powerful voice here...I loved this, I can almost hear it sung:)~Dandy

Insanity
01-05-2004, 05:34 PM
Yeah, awesome song..I had a tune in my head while I read.

Lady Arduriel
01-08-2004, 04:25 PM
thank you guys, you're awesome!

blowitch
01-09-2004, 11:44 PM
reading this made me feel emotions I wasn't ready to feel right now. very powerful piece.

~bloWitch
"once is enough"

endlesswrv
01-10-2004, 12:07 AM
so amazing... i love reading new lyrics, and much like the other viewers of your piece, i truly enjoyed it.

Lady Arduriel
01-12-2004, 09:00 AM
glad to hear it, guys...it's nice when you can release your anger and have people enjoy the results...

Lyly
01-18-2004, 06:18 PM
Yes, very powerful song. Increadible flow and dark majesty. Tres bien. - Lyly

Lady Arduriel
01-20-2004, 02:18 PM
merci!!! :D

elven ice angel
03-13-2004, 07:21 AM
This is very professional! i LOVE it! writing lyrics is such a hard thing to do - but you make it seem as though you have no troubles at all!

well done on a stunning (yet dark) song!

darkfaze2003
03-13-2004, 12:08 PM
hey there Lady A. Nice rhythm to this one. "cry yourself to death" is absolutely fantastic line - so good in factr I wish it was freakin mine!!!!!! Nice writing

Lady Arduriel
03-13-2004, 03:55 PM
thankya!:)

Matt
03-14-2004, 05:30 PM
Yeah everyone is right, this is a fantastic piece.
it's nice when you can release your anger and have people enjoy the results
It is and I always find writing is one of the best outlets for anger (and just about any other emotion really).

Much enjoyed.:)

Lady Arduriel
03-14-2004, 05:58 PM
very true, matt. Glad you liked it.