PDA

View Full Version : Tiny Angels


Tavis263
01-06-2004, 03:18 AM
gathering ants
beneath your feet
courtyards bravado
are you fractured
just let the boogie man in
never should you sleep
energy and melted butter
slide away
little princess
oh im red hot craving
tiny angels
beneath your feet
keep your mind quiet
day or night
images of sun spots
holy water you'll understand
you'll never wake
from the madness
you'll wonder
about your new confusion
share the rain
take in the illusion
best you can tell
theres nothing left for you
you're burning at both ends
pain is nothing
you've just entered breathless
share in my illusion
you left your heart behind
imagine this confusion
tiny little angels
come to put you to sleep forever
imagine your consception
of deaths final days
im watching from above
you will burn
burn forever
inside the streets
of confusion
shed your lies
and ill come for you
with tiny little angels
beneath my feet

Dandylion
01-06-2004, 06:23 PM
This is wonderful! I love the symbolism, the great lines about illusion and confusion...tint angels...wow...I loved this. I just cant ooh and ahh enough!~Dandy

Territorial Hawk
01-31-2004, 05:45 AM
and ill come for you
with tiny little angels
beneath my feet


Groovy.

Tavis263
12-17-2004, 03:16 AM
:c)

Eireann
12-17-2004, 11:43 AM
oooo i love this!

you'll never wake
from the madness
you'll wonder
about your new confusion
share the rain
take in the illusion

awesome poem!

the_grey_girl
12-17-2004, 09:07 PM
OMG, this is wonderful :)

Ladyburst
12-19-2004, 07:49 PM
Excellent poem!

.Ladyburst.

iblieve
01-01-2005, 05:51 PM
A nice blend of darkness with images of light thrown in. iblieve

VelvetCrow
01-06-2005, 11:46 PM
this is like touching velvet with the eyes....
excellent write.

Tavis263
02-03-2005, 02:09 AM
Thanks Everyone :blush:

Bryan
02-03-2005, 03:15 PM
very unique

in depth

I enjoyed