Shells On Beaches

[Dandylion]

I go back,
time, I would imagine,
can stand still
in my mind.

It is not a pleasure
to be back here,
under the coldness
that makes me ill.

I still hate you.
Does that suprise you?
It shouldnt.

You ate my soul
with both fists.

Shells on beaches
are collectable
but dead.

[iblieve]

The metaphor is brilliant, the last lines genius. Darkly painted my dear, but darkness is my delight, as long as you are there. "C"

[Tavis263]

Very nice and to the point. Sometimes you
just have to take it there. I don't see
dark as much as I see the Pain. To go
Back to such a dreadful Place and forge
out those same memories can be painful
but very therapeutic. :p

Motavis
motavis@futureskully.com
http://www.motavis.com

[Soul Tribunal]

Your not a shell yet....
There is still ink in your veins....

Dennis

[Territorial Hawk]

Dandy,

To the point. You say a lot.