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Tavis263
01-09-2004, 12:18 AM
In the second room
That sunny after noon
I've spoken to soon
I'll try again, just for you
Shiny stars, they're floating by
I want to lay here and watch you die
But no one can take, what you have given
'round the clock inner circles driven
I stop the hands
Night falls
That sunny after noon
My shiny star passes by
I'm glad to see you leave this room
Never alone
Just a do it yourself passenger
Sailing by the moonlights destiny
I'm sure I'll see you soon
Shiny stars, they're floating by
Floating by



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iblieve
01-09-2004, 12:31 PM
Nice one my friend, not too many shining stars left in this old world, that's why I love the night sky. iblieve

Dandylion
01-10-2004, 12:33 AM
beautiful...fast becoming a fan:) I really loved the images in this one...keep em coming~Dandy

Soul Tribunal
01-11-2004, 06:02 PM
A mystic and somewhat hopeful way to portray death in its rawness....

Well done,

Dennis

Territorial Hawk
01-24-2004, 01:39 AM
It seems musical, at least to me.

I like it, Tavis.

Tavis263
01-30-2004, 02:47 PM
Thanks everyone. YAY Dandylion thanks for becoming a fan. Ummm
Territorial Hawk do you mean musical like and Off Broadway show? I'm
so confused now (but when ain't I)hehe


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