Go There

[blowitch]

There's this girl that I don't even know
she pervades my thoughts,
invades my dreams.
I have never spoken to her,
though she makes me nervous

Hazy summer, the time is passing slow
I drive a car named loneliness
But it gets me where I need to go.

One day I’m gonna ask her,
Why we can’t be more
Than just friends.
And when that day comes
I hope I have the strength to stand alone.

Hazy summer, the time is passing slow
I drive a car named loneliness
But it gets me where I need to go.

Why must I always be afraid?
Why do I always feel this pain?
All I ever wanted was to love,
And to be loved in return.
But all I’ve ever gotten was burned.

Hazy summer, the time is passing slow
I drive a car named loneliness
But it gets me where I need to go, where do I need to go?

~bloWitch
"once is never enough"

[Dandylion]

I liked this and can picture it sung too. Nice write..I like the car of lonliness...pretty cool~Dandy

[Lyly]

BloW- Good opening stanza, gets the attention of the reader. The lines: "I drive a car named loneliness/But it gets me where I need to go." are really effective in emphasizing the root emotion in this song to the reader. And personaly, I just love the twist question for the ending. Bien. - Lyly And it's good to see you in this forum, hope to see you more!!