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Dandylion
01-13-2004, 02:29 PM
You are almost gone,
I can feel the distance moving in.
Long awaited freedom
has arrived,
a stamp of judicial approval.
I will not miss you,
I havent yet.
I wish you well
because thats the kind of woman
I have turned out to be.
You never knew her,
the gentle woman
unable to harm a fly.
You saw the dark places
and they scared you.
You are almost gone.
One day this nightmare
will end.

janus
01-14-2004, 02:14 PM
i don't think he deserved to see the 'real' you. Only those who love you for you should be blessed by the real you. I believe that you have found the right one to love you. Keep flying, sweet lady ~sean

iblieve
01-15-2004, 10:21 PM
I agree with sean, it doesn't deserve to know the real you, it had his chance and never bothered to look at the beautiful creature that shared his life. **** him you are mine now for as long as you want to be. iblieve

sTILLbREATHING?
01-20-2004, 02:48 PM
this one was great...
the ending was great.. and so was the rest of it..
it was honest... and emotional

its a good thing that nightmares come to an end..
thats what gets us through them...

can't wait to read more.. keep it up!

sb...

Moonshine
01-28-2004, 04:28 PM
Did I miss this one too? It's a good thing I checked! Again, this is something I can relate to, but you bring out asense of personal integrity to this that I admire, very much. Who is the better person in this poem? You are. He had no right to see the real you, and only can choose whom you wish to reveal to. It's lovely, now, to have the power to say yes or no.

Hugs
Moonshine x