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Lady Arduriel
01-15-2004, 04:38 PM
these pills spill in front of me
rainbows of my sanity
promising redemption
manufactured salvation
and since I've nowhere to go
and my twisted mind will not slow
I take my last resort, I
take the dose and do not cry

you say you've saved me from myself
now I'm in a manufactured hell
you say that I'm a danger
that I will harm myself
but I just want escape from you
so what do I have to lose

there's nothing left to lose...

I have lost myself between
these doses and their dreams
those dreams are not my own
but I don't want to be alone
can you kiss my scars goodbye
and free my soul from all these lies
can medicine bring me the sun
or are my chances already gone

can you save me from myself
from this manufactured hell
I'm tired of this danger
and I will not harm myself
I can't escape from you
there's too much for me to lose

and I can't believe you care
when no one else is there
so save me from myself

Lyly
01-18-2004, 06:37 PM
Lady A, an overall great piece again. You have excellent flow and word choice that enhances the mood of this song. Some lines that really stood out for me were, "I have lost myself between/these doses and their dreams" Cheers - Lyly

Insanity
01-19-2004, 02:16 PM
yeah,powerful write..wow

Lady Arduriel
01-20-2004, 02:17 PM
yeah, wanta send it to my therapist...lol.