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strawberygashes
01-16-2004, 12:18 AM
In the night
I wait in the dark
Moon light shining down on me
My body casting shadow on the grey bricks
In the night I wait for him
To come dragging his cape
Across the cold ground

In the corner
I am there waiting for his
Figure to show
In that corner, oh so cold
I am forsaken to be in this place

In the grave
I am dead
In the grave
I am pale and lifeless

Forever this will be my playground

Dandylion
01-16-2004, 12:50 AM
dark...so dark...I love the ending on this one...glad you reposted:)~Dandy

strawberygashes
01-16-2004, 12:53 AM
thanks dandy.

~morgan

iblieve
01-16-2004, 04:29 AM
Ah my goth friends would love this. Bloodiedlust writes poetry like this, excellent dark writing morgan. I'll take the darkness any day over sweetness, it's usually artificial sweetener anyway, lol just kidding, still I do love the darknesss. Thanks for re-posting this old classic . iblieve

strawberygashes
01-17-2004, 08:02 PM
This piece was actually much shorter and bland. I changed it. Thank you for your comment.

~morgan

TearyEied
01-22-2004, 11:13 PM
wow. that was awsome. good job, mogran.
Teary

strawberygashes
01-23-2004, 09:15 AM
Thanks.

~morgan

Territorial Hawk
07-02-2005, 11:31 AM
dark...