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iblieve
01-16-2004, 05:29 PM
Last time
the storm came,
love’s unrequited
hurricane,
with rain washed
my dreams away
I was still making
the needed repairs
on my washed out mind.

Then you came
blowing through,
just another storm bringer
bringing me down.


Now I’m wasted
on useless thinking
pondering over
bluer skies,
and how
I never see it coming.
Storm warning siren
do not work
in my washed out mind.

I think it’s going to be
a long time
before I step
into the sunshine.
Comfortable with darkness
and loneliness
in my cellar of
insecurity.

Use to believe
lightning
never strikes twice
in the same place,
but in love that
does not apply.
Every storm bringer
looks for
a flimsy heart
like mine
to blow away.

So down here
in the darkness
I’m going to stay
until I’ve repaired
the damage done.
It was you blowing through
my wasted mind,
done ****ed me up
this time.

Now I’m wasted
on useless thinking
pondering over
bluer skies,
and how I never
see it coming,
while coming to terms
about the last time
a storm bringer
came blowing through my mind.

iblieve

beththepoet
01-16-2004, 05:32 PM
wow. so much emotion in this, simply excellent.

Dandylion
01-17-2004, 01:20 PM
deeply, darkly emotional my love. How heartbreaking! I think there are blue skies ahead....at least thats what the weather man said. I sure hope so:)~Dandy

strawberygashes
01-22-2004, 05:43 PM
Beautiful, emotional, great piece of writing here.

~morgan

iblieve
01-23-2004, 11:26 PM
Thanks Beth, this was how love went for me till I met Dandy

Thanks Dandy, yep I would say sunny skies were ahead except we live in Oregon, does the sun ever shine. I love it here anyway because you are here, love "C"

Thanks Morgan, hope the storm bringers stay away from you and you see nothing but sunny skies. iblieve

Mendum
01-24-2004, 01:38 AM
yet another emotion filled, excellent piece - mendum**

janus
01-24-2004, 07:10 AM
My friend, your emotional history is truly painful. You express it with a heart that is battered and bruised. I hope that your emotional future will be as comforting and enjoyable as it can possibly be. I know Heidi will see to that. Good luck ~sean

Angel
01-24-2004, 12:08 PM
I can relate so much to this...you have just described me! I'm still looking for the blue skies though.

A stunning piece of work iblieve

Jess

Moonshine
01-28-2004, 03:31 PM
Wow. I'm stunned. This piece blew me away. A testimony of your talent.

Your friend,
Moonshine x

iblieve
01-29-2004, 01:14 AM
Thnks for the comments everyone, and angel, the blue skies will come. Mine did--iblieve

Dandylion
02-08-2004, 01:08 AM
I had to re-read this one. You know how I get...lol. Well, I see so much in this and I can see why everyone has been reading it. I love the voice in this, so uniquely you, brilliant my love. ~Dandy

iblieve
02-08-2004, 02:24 PM
Thanks Dandy, I have come ouot of the storm cellar and love has chased away the dark clouds. Still, I love this poem because it reminds me of where I was just a short time ago emotionally. You are the goddess of light and calm skies. Love "C"