I prayed

[Lyly]

And I prayed, yes I prayed
I prayed because you believe
And I believe what you believe is true
That anything exists with love
So I prayed for you

You need to understand
You need to hear
You need confrontational salvation
And a silent sanctuary
A pillow and a hymnal for your fears

I am on my knees
You need to see this isn’t best
You want my truthful justification
And a reason I can’t find
And I confess there’s a conflict in me

So I prayed, yes I prayed
I prayed because you believe
And I believe what you believe is true
That anything exists with love
So I prayed for you

You need to realize
You have your tears
You must feel the proclamation of my
Own choice crucifixion
On the stonewall you built around yourself

I am bleeding now
Let it cleanse the paths you travel
This is your reclamation for your
Injured soul, keep it sacred this time
And I’ll forgive all of your sins

And I prayed, yes I prayed
I prayed because you believe
And I believe what you believe is true
That anything exists with love
So I prayed for you

I said I prayed, oh I prayed
I prayed for you, I prayed
May it all come true for you
I prayed

[crazylacey1818]

""I am bleeding now
Let it cleanse the paths you travel
This is your reclamation for your
Injured soul, keep it sacred this time
And I’ll forgive all of your sins""

W O W. Lyly, your works are amazing. I love re-reading some of them. You have TRUE talent.

[Lyly]

You made me blush...wow, thank you. That is definately one of the top compliments I have ever recieved...ever. I really don't know what to say except, thank you. Thank You. - Lyly

[Brittney L]

Lyly,
I hope this gets read more because it deserves it. I'm only sorry that I hadn't got to it sooner. You should be proud of this one.
I am on my knees
You need to see this isn’t best
You want my truthful justification
And a reason I can’t find
And I confess there’s a conflict in me

This stood out for me the most. Especially with the last line in there. It's your confession and what a great one to go along!

The entire atmosphere of this song made it enjoyable.
Really liked this one, Lyly. Probably one of the best I've seen from you.

Britt

[Lyly]

Thank you Brittney, I hope it gets read more too! lol. Thanks for all the comments, definately made me smile!! - Lyly

[woollams812]

I really can picture this, something I wish my girlfriend would say. The tone is really engaging and it held me through the entire poem. This poem is an epic, one to frame and put on the wall.

[Lyly]

Thanks Woollams...wow, an epic, I always wanted to write one of those!! :) I'm glad you think so highly of it. - Lyly