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Presence
01-19-2004, 07:28 PM
Final Goodbyes

She called me today in floods of tears
She wouldn't tell me what was wrong
I tried my best to hear her words
As I sat on the bus travelling home.
She cried her heart out in gulping pain
She told me she was in a hospital ward
Yet she wouldn't explain what was wrong
Or why she just needed to hear a friend.
She talked in circles in pools of tears
She asked me not to enquire about her
She talked about life and all its worth
And then turned to the idea of death.
She frightened me 'til I was white with angst
She said her final goodbyes as she cried
And as I remained as silent as stone
I just didn't know what more to say.
She begged for forgiveness as she apologised
She choked on the gulps of deathly air
I began to feel I was a bad friend
Being too self-involved to notice her pain.
She said her final goodbye again
She then hung up and there was silence
Now I feel desperate and helpless
Anything I do will be wrong.

Dandylion
01-20-2004, 03:04 AM
anything I do will be wrong...wow...great finish to this...I hope all turns out well. ~Dandy

Presence
01-23-2004, 10:09 AM
I wish I knew how it is all turning out. I can't seem to get in contact with her so I have yet to talk to her. These are scary times and I hate not knowing. Presence

iblieve
01-24-2004, 01:28 AM
You captured the fear and the helplessness we sometimes feel perfectly. I wish you and her the best, Maybe she can find the light herself and will call, much love my friend iblieve

Territorial Hawk
01-24-2004, 01:44 AM
You capture a lot, Presence.

Presence
01-24-2004, 10:22 AM
Thank you. Presence