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DarkestDoor
01-22-2004, 02:56 AM
The belting whip lashing down
Never before had the sickness burned so fierce
Fire after Fire
Nail after Nail
Crucified under a bloody moon
Bastard child of a forgatten time

And in the darkness the Angel spoke
Calling, promising
Life, Breath
Ever shall we live and Breath with me
Hesitate no more

And with the extension of a hand
Acceptance of a dark Lover
Finality
In a life so cold
Life so empty
Hatred so old

And in the darkness the Angel spoke
Drawing away the life
Sucking in the Demon's breath
The man was taken
Betrothed to the Fire and suckled by Pain

For in the darkness the Angel had spoken

iblieve
01-22-2004, 03:11 AM
I see you found the right category, darkness suits you well my friend. Being a lover of darkness and feasting on the darker emotions in life which I write about often, I found this to be quite satisfying. Welcome to the darkness my friend. iblieve

DarkestDoor
01-22-2004, 03:30 AM
thank you. i can see that i have actually found a place where i can express my darkest thoughts and feelings and be understood by others of like mind.

Dandylion
01-22-2004, 01:35 PM
iblieve my Prince of Darkness has found you...lol. He is right, this is a wonderful feast of darkness. I am in love with this one...Im glad you are here...I cant wait to read more:)~Dandy

strawberygashes
01-22-2004, 06:51 PM
Wow, that was an amazing piece of work. Imagery and wording very good.

~morgan

TearyEied
01-26-2004, 06:34 AM
wow, this is beautiful. good job.
Teary