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DarkestDoor
01-22-2004, 03:37 AM
As I watch the Watchers
Watching me
Accross the stone river
I wait
Alone in my hollow soul
To be taken
I am destined to fall
Become one of them

Bloodthirsty
Everhungry
Alwaysdying

So it goes

Do not want to leave
Ever wishing to go
I will become them

I am the Crazed

Dandylion
01-22-2004, 01:33 PM
welcome to AC and what a fine read to start off with! I love the darkness in this one...beautifully dark....awesome:)~Dandy

strawberygashes
01-22-2004, 06:31 PM
Very cool. Welcome to AC. I bet your getting that alot. Good piece here.

~morgan

Territorial Hawk
02-15-2004, 02:32 AM
Another good one.

iblieve
10-18-2004, 02:01 PM
Aren't we all, but the crazed state of mind has its up side. I like your darkness. iblieve