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yellowhead
01-23-2004, 02:40 AM
Bold truth:

Where I stand
Is not so far from your feet
I’ve walked for hours
Just to hear your heart beat
But when I came it was not what it seemed
There was desolance and flames
Where your soul used to be.

Men like you
Are no different from
Others I’ve seen
You hate yourself
So you make another feel
Useless and mean.

I hate to say it
But I’ve come to realize
That you were best love
I’ve had in my life
And you weren’t that good.
And you weren’t very handsome
You never loved me like you should
You only took my heart for granted.

We’re only creations of who we’ve always to be
And the people with whom we have relations
Are the truest forms of manifestation
That one can bring dream in knots with reality.

Repeat vrs. 3

Lyly
01-25-2004, 08:09 PM
Oh, nice....very nice. "I walked for hours just to hear your heart beat" love that line, love it. And I am very pleased that it is the third verse that repeats, that's definately got strength, and the title connects so well with that. Tres bien. -Lyly

yellowhead
01-31-2004, 05:05 AM
thank you:)