View Full Version : Save Your Last Kiss

01-24-2004, 02:43 AM
Seeing you there living your life,
Watching from the distance,
Just knowing that you’re there,
People try getting close to you,
Something you just exploit,
Craving their attention,
Wanting to be the object of their desires,
Once upon a time this made me jealous,
Many times it made me cry,
Begging you to return home with me,
Asking for you to save your last kiss for me.

Three years later the scene repeats,
No same feelings evolve,
No jealousy,
No anger…no hurt…no pain,
Just pity,
A shadow of your former self,
Just look at what you’ve become,
A sad old man with no life worth living,
No love in that heart, which is now made of stone,
The boot, so to speak, is well and truly on the other foot,
Just see who has changed,
Yes…me…aswell as you,
Some for the better…and some for the worst,
One thing still different…mine is worth living.

01-24-2004, 08:02 AM
Wow. Just wow. I loved this. Good for you...

Moonshine x

01-26-2004, 11:13 PM
all i can say is thank you for your kind words - mendum*

01-27-2004, 03:33 AM
this was beautiful...very well written...glad I stopped in:)~Dandy

01-28-2004, 02:35 PM
Good job, i really like this one!

01-28-2004, 02:37 PM
I love it. Those type of people really annoy me.good write eh

02-02-2004, 02:04 AM
thank you all for your really kind comments...much love mendum*

02-02-2004, 01:32 PM
it is always good to see another has grown past the pain, well said.

02-11-2004, 01:41 AM
when recovering from pain, you really have no choice but to grow past it...and with god's will it will make you stronger...*mendum