Upset

[crazylacey1818]

UPSET

Oh, im pretty upset with youuuuu
Just a little upset with youuuuuuu

Oh Jessie how could you
Ohhh Jessie how could youuu
Why did I have to cry
Why did you have to die

Im getting pretty upset with youuu
Oh Jessie, upset with you

tore me apart
right from the start
stab me in the back
you f###ed the brains out of jack.

Jessie im enraged with you
Oh, Jessie im upset with you
but you are the tramp
you need a fore-head stamp
Break the lonely hearts from the start
Jessie you sure know your part

and Jessie, im upset with youuuu
getting more upset with youuuu

I shot
you hovered
like a child undercover
I screamed
you shouted

Oh Jessie, I was so upset with youuuuuu
upset with youuuuuuuuu
now Jessie, im upset with you

[Lyly]

Ooo, I liked this...I was drawn in by the use of names in the piece, not a technique used very often it seems but it works in this case. Definately a strong, enjoyable read. I think this one is gonna stick in my head for awhile... :) - Lyly

[crazylacey1818]

Originally posted by Lyly
Ooo, I liked this...I was drawn in by the use of names in the piece, not a technique used very often it seems but it works in this case. Definately a strong, enjoyable read. I think this one is gonna stick in my head for awhile... :) - Lyly

Hey Lyly, I like a lot of your stuff too.

I like the part of this song that says, You fed the brains out of Jack.

This song, is right next to my Hell Town song I think I like them both the same..

Thank you for all the nice comments!!!

your amazing,

Lacey