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01-25-2004, 11:34 AM
I fell in love
only now I just fall
so i'm off
to douse my pain in alcohol.


I was so hoping not to have to post in this forum for a long time.
this was in my journal the day it happened. (yesterday)
that's all for now
more to come as I cope

stay tuned for a play by play of my mending heart...

mike poet
01-25-2004, 11:40 AM
I feel you man. I've been there too many times myself. Heartfelt poems are good for all to read but the one who wrote it felt the pain. Strange how sometimes such beauty comes from pain.

01-27-2004, 03:52 AM
Ryan, my dear...I was hoping you wouldnt need to post here either:(
As sad as this is, I did like the poem. Im so sorry it is true. Hang in there, you have many friends here who love your work and love you.
Be blessed my friend.
Love Dandy

01-30-2004, 09:35 PM
beautiful. good job. the stuff that one doesnt TRY to make good is always the best. good job.

02-02-2004, 01:34 PM
waiting for the sequel, the one that shows less pain and more hope - I am sure you'll get there ;)

02-03-2004, 03:03 PM
Beki, it's still being worked out, but an update would be "Black Widow" in Love in General. It's not exactly a sequel, but a realization that I will go back. But I am feeling a lot better now.
but still confused.