build the burden

[potusa]

see you on the other side
the place of heart, soul and mind
where we will dance a thousand nights
make it count and keep it right
the time to live
has left us now
but we move on
and love aloud
our hearts are one
they beat the same
tonight we'll live
without the blame...

(of the) manifested factory
production line of love
artificial intelligence
we can't lose what we can't touch

hold me back
in your sweet arms
robotic gesture
feel the love
the metal sound
of our hearts
melting point
of molton lust
but we can, separate, our hearts, from ourselves
and live for, a better day, our hearts... bleed the same!

(in this) manifested factory
production line of love
artificial intelligence
we can't lose what we can't touch

flip the switch
and shut them down
feel the power
drain inside us
and all thats left
in its place
soul and mind
the hearts at stake
can we ever, come to terms, in this life, we build the burden!

(of this) manifested factory
production line of love
artificial intelligence
we can't lose what we can't touch

(in this) manifested factory
production line of love
artificial intelligence
we can't lose what we can't love

[penpainter]

This is just begging for some computer chiming and animated, robot video!!! :)

[Brittney L]

Potusa,
A great big welcome to Lyrics & Music! This was spectacular. I couldn't even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this piece.
It's so rich!
manifested factory
production line of love
artificial intelligence
we can't lose what we can't touch

hold me back
in your sweet arms
robotic gesture
feel the love
the metal sound
of our hearts
melting point
of molton lust

I absolutely had to quote this entire bit. You bring the idea of "manifested factory" and carry it all the way through and I have to say it's just beautifully done.

I'd like to quote the entire song. Your imagery is so well done. When I say that this was an excellent write, I mean that deeply.
So...excellent write!

Britt :)

[potusa]

just re reading some of my earliest posts and came across your response.

sorry for the delay, but thank you so sooo much. it really means a lot to me.

in peace and struggle,
dave-o

[darkfaze2003]

manifested factory is a way cool line, reminds me of eraserhead.

[manic]

'production line of love' is my favourite. good stuff, hopefully we'll see more of your writing here.

-sarah

[potusa]

dark, manic...cheers!

in peace and struggle,
dave-o