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Hawk
01-27-2004, 02:17 AM
Another one from the diaries.

Adieu

I cannot love you
as you deserve
without causing you pain
so I will simply bid you
adieu
and wish you well

Dandylion
01-27-2004, 02:26 AM
This is so honest and cold, not in a mean way, but in a ..save yourself kind of way. Wow..I loved it! This is my new favorte by you...brilliant!~Dandy

Hawk
01-27-2004, 02:30 AM
Dandy,

thank you.

Presence
01-29-2004, 09:59 PM
Wow, this is so cool. It's a point of view I don't normally take. Presence

Hawk
01-30-2004, 05:13 AM
Presence,

thank you. I like to take things from different angles and different points of view.

Beki
02-02-2004, 12:34 PM
sometimes the hardest thing to do, but also the most loving....nicely succinct

Hawk
02-03-2004, 11:44 PM
Beki,

thank you. It means a lot to me.

Insanity
02-04-2004, 01:28 PM
Its cool that you can put thoughts down in a poetic form making them mean something more.good write

Hawk
02-07-2004, 05:42 AM
Insanity,

thank you.