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Donut
01-27-2004, 12:40 PM
If pure is the cure
It is past time to sip
No virgin-like fix
Will ever touch your lips

Hold her
In your dreams
Nothing can stop
Those ageless screams
Nothing can stop
The blood red streams

Hold on
Hold on
Take comfort in this
If death be your cure
Your candle is lit

Hold on
Hold on
Take comfort in this
If death be an angel
Near you she sits

Dandylion
01-27-2004, 04:01 PM
Donut...this is beautiful. So ripe with images...makes me feel so many things...I loved this one.~Dandy

Donut
01-27-2004, 04:22 PM
Thanks Dandy. Enjoyed hearing your reply.

Presence
01-28-2004, 02:09 PM
I really like the imagery you use. Most interesting. It's an inspiring poem that has offered me a lot to think about. Presence

Donut
01-28-2004, 02:36 PM
Thank-you Presence. I appreciate reading your reply.

Territorial Hawk
02-16-2004, 12:14 AM
Take comfort in this
If death be an angel
Near you she sits


Oh, I love these lines.

Donut
02-16-2004, 08:09 AM
Thanks T-Hawk, glad you enjoyed.