PDA

View Full Version : Ratatoskr(in the form of Voluntary by Poeticpiers)


ompholos
02-03-2004, 09:49 PM
Ratatoskr*

up down the boughs of Yggdrasil
the squirrel bolts zig zag lightning paths
up high to where the raptors thrill.

a Hermes with a twitching tail,
up down the boughs of Yggdrasil
he leaps, immune to all trevail.

amongst the roots he plays with skill
to ravel earth and sky in jest
up down the boughs of Yggdrasil.

*the squirrel in Norse mythology that bears envious words between the great worm(Nidhoggr) gnawing at the root of the world tree(Yggdrasil) and the great Eagle in its branches.

Poeticpiers
02-04-2004, 03:12 PM
I bow to your mastery and expess my thanks ivor

monkey boy
02-04-2004, 11:00 PM
dang, this is wonderful and I am envious - I've always wanted to write something on Yggdrasil. well done!
mb

('ware the worm)

ompholos
02-05-2004, 01:15 AM
Ivor- I return the bow and thank you for the form.

mb- thanks, I always worry about using mythological references. I can just imagine eyes glazing over at the mere mention of them

Territorial Hawk
02-19-2004, 07:16 AM
wow, you learn something new every day.