Blue Sky

[Moonshine]

Clouds tumble across the sky,
Like waves on a stormy sea,
Moving farther past than the eye can see.
In their wake, they leave a sky so blue,
And the world in brighter shades of colour.
Rain washes away the world's troubles,
Give a searching soul a fresh outlook,
With only the sun to warm the searching heart.

[LitSalsa]

The sun & wind
blow dry me...
Arms outstretched,
in the breeze,
it's nearly sensual.

[Poeticpiers]

Good visual impact clear images ivor

[Michael]

Moonshine, your words create an idyllic imprint for this reader.

As Piers has pointed out, your images are clearly expressed. Originally posted by Moonshine
Rain washes away the world's troubles,
Give a searching soul a fresh outlook
I find this passage especially soothing, given my experience with the steady sound of rain. It, indeed, gives one “a fresh outlook”.

Soothing, vivid and well written.http://instagiber.net/smiliesdotcom/cwm/cwm/rain.gif

[Moonshine]

Thank you, Lit. I hope you enjoyed this as you read it, as I enjoyed your addition, too. :)

Thanks, Ivor! :D

Michael, thank you for taking the time to read and to comment. I wrote this on the short train journey to work, a long time ago.

Yours,
Moonshine x

[Territorial Hawk]

Moonshine,

you describe it well, with a lot of colour.

[Moonshine]

Thank you Hawk and Grey, I'm sorry that it's taken me awhile to reply - I've been away, again, thank you. :)

Moonshine