My Bloody Athame

[iblieve]

Dance between the red flames rising
Passion bright shadows harmonizing
Catch the breath of death reviving
Suck it down so tantalizing
Would but freedom dance with me
In darkness night I am free
Hallow winds cuts like surgery
Into the nerves revives my senses
Take the knife and stab it deep
Over you I shall not weep
It was the only way to enter sleep
Burn brightly my last flame
Burn brightly, seeds insane
Catch the heat of a soul aflame
And as I die I feel no shame
As I fall with my bloody athame
My sacrifice, always the same
My sacrifice, I am to blame
My sacrifice was me, just an end game
To a life that drove me insane
I fall with my athame plunged through my heart
I thank it for ripping it apart
Now in death life will start

I know life is wicked and black
I learned it’s broken and cracked
I never expected any slack
I know I die to go back
To where I belong
Just another spirit headed for home.

iblieve

[TearyEied]

good job. this brought tears to my eyes. wow.

Teary

[PenSamurai]

Loved it. Excellent job!

[Dandylion]

I want to go home.
I loved this. You have such a powerful way of expressing yourself.
I love you~Dandy

[iblieve]

TearyEied, PenSamurai, and my dearest Dandy, thanks for the comments, I do appreciate it. iblieve

[Collin]

This piece could be put to music quite easily I think. It has rhyme and rhythm, and also the sadness and anger that most good music needs. Thanks for sharing.

[iblieve]

Thanks collin, yea I wish I could write for a metal band of pantera's caliber, or someone on the rise. It is still a thrill to write and post at Arcanum and see the commetns. Thanks my friend for the compliment. iblieve.