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Early morning,
another trip
to the woodpile.
My footprints,
deep reminders
of winter's snow.
The warming fire,
my thoughts on spring.
The disappointment,
as I put another day
on hold.
Poeticpiers
02-07-2004, 01:12 PM
Days on hold , holdopportunities Mac Today I am house bound by snow so Iwrite
I am excused from other duties
Territorial Hawk
02-19-2004, 10:46 PM
Mac,
it's a testament to how brilliant you are, that I can see it in my mind, while the temperature just peaks at 47C.
naturalist
02-26-2004, 01:27 AM
I believe that what they call the 'ol spring hold :D
I love the way you turned the ordinary into the extrodinary with this one.
monkey boy
02-26-2004, 09:53 PM
nice write with the simplest of elements.
<sigh> the dog days of winter, to be sure.
mb
laleesh
03-01-2004, 08:54 PM
wow mac! such a diminutive piece to pack such voluminous disappointment, and anticipation!
you're good!
:)
laleesh
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