Thoughts on life &death

[Firecracker]

Power bleeds away
stolen by flowers watching
and petals will be crushed.
I must....
nectar......poisonous??

I smile
weak but
brave.

Heaven awaits.

[Collin]

I like the ambiguity of the piece. It is short and potent. It makes you think, which I always enjoy. Thanks.

[Dandylion]

This is fabulous. I love poems that make me think. Im glad I caught this one. Gonna ponder on it awhile:)~Dandy

[TearyEied]

Heven awaits

excelent line to end with. good job.

teary

[Territorial Hawk]

Firecracker,

oh I love this.