Go Away

[Jessie]

Walk into the room
The door won't open
Windows locked away
Watch the blood pool
And stale in walls
of concrete innocence

[iblieve]

I commented on this earlier today, don't know where it went. I liked the ambiguity of this one. Excellent my friend iblieve

[Dandylion]

Very cool, makes the mind churn with images:)~Dandy

[woollams812]

I read this as an ode to Kurt Cobain, amazing how poems can be interpreted in so many ways.

[Jessie]

Woollams, that's not what it meant to me... though it is odd that you interpreted it that way, considering he's my favorite musician.

[Territorial Hawk]

Jessie,

very good.

[poisndthotz]

poetry can be ironic.
i liked the last line. Let us know how unknowing the pool of blood was....