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Firecracker
02-11-2004, 05:53 PM
A little picture show
almost naive in it's form
heads the light
as the sky falls so sweetly
on the dewdrop
of another Welsh morning daybreak.

In all it's innocence,
romance and clear freshness shine
over the water
like beacons
on a misty day
to entice even the most unsure
and
guide
them
to what they were afraid to see.

Territorial Hawk
02-19-2004, 06:17 AM
Firecracker,

this is the reason I never wanted to come home.

Poeticpiers
02-21-2004, 09:30 AM
I see it in my mind and undestand at last Hiraeth ivor

Michael
02-23-2004, 04:53 PM
Firecracker, I’ve never been to Wales. In fact, my only travel “abroad” has been to Mexico, Canada and Jamaica.

However, you invite my imagination to view a part of your homeland.
Originally posted by Firecracker
as the sky falls so sweetly
on the dewdrop
of another Welsh morning daybreak.
In the passage above, you also touch my partiality for alliteration.

This piece just reinforces your signature. You’ve made me a believer! http://mindscraps.com/s/contrib/lynx/whitpleased.gif